I miss those days
I miss those ways
When we walked together hand in hand
Without caring whether its sun or sand
Those memories still makes me feel alive
I'll cherish u guys for the rest of my life
They say out of sight is out of mind
But your very thought makes me go rewind
Those bikes those rides those beaches
Those flying high days seems out of reaches
Those were the times when we were the kings
Now this is the life we're all battling
Wish those days would have lasted forever
I wanna be the same and grow up never !!!
nw this is wat i cal awesum..... those days were legendary buddyyy..... lemme come to blore, v ll relive thodse days... only thing v gonna miss wud b chicking
ReplyDeletehow bout KFC ???
ReplyDeletereally yaar...those were the days..evryone wants to go bak n have that fun..just one more time!!!
ReplyDeletesolid likha hai......tu sale itni solid poetry kab se likhne laga.....??
ReplyDeletethis damn piece of poetry turns on my memories of those old days...u read again and again...and u go more n more back to those old times...kaash yaar ek rewind ka control hota humaari life mein !!
ReplyDeleteNow this Guy has become a true poet .............this metamorphism is truly something to cherish though astonishing at the same time . you can never believe this is the same maaggi who can do such poetic Jobs..............
ReplyDeleteAur yeh saala bar bar mujhse comment marne ko kehta hain .....$%^$%^%$^
awesome ritesh! good one! :)
ReplyDeleteDost jo beet gaya usse bhul jaaa...aage ka soch ..abhi toh dhamaal machana hai..
ReplyDeletewho so ever will read these lines...take my words...he/she would definitely go back in time and memorize his/her days of fun. The days when we were alive...the days when we had no time to think what we are doing...when we were spontaneous in our actions...when there was no second thought in our mind...when we defined our ways of fun...
ReplyDeleteThe poet says in his last lines and I quote, "Wish those days would have lasted forever
I wanna be the same and grow up never" are the most touching lines in this poem.It summarizes the whole feeling of the good time that we all have lived in our lives were so very precious to us. They are still alive in our thoughts and our memories. I too wish that I never wanna grow up...but alas!!!...nature has its own course...its own hard rules...(to be conti.)
it seems my first attempt to post a comment was unsuccessfull...take 2...very lyrically takes you back to the gud old days...gives that im never gonna be that happy feel :( :(
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